Necessity is the mother of invention, due to life's needs, people start to invent methods to making their lives easier. There are lots of examples on the modern inventions like: computers, planes and cell-phones. All these stuff changed our lives and made it more comfortable and luxuries. Our world had experienced many changes within the last century, and one of the most influence changes is the invention of the cellphone. The cellphone has completely changed the way we communicate, convenience, and quality of our communication.
The cell phone has made communication more convenient than ever before, however earlier people used to write letters and post them to their relatives and friends. On the other hand, now people have a great invention of cell phone with them so that they can make a phone call anytime, anywhere..
In addition, when people send letters earlier it took so much of time to inform other person about anything, but now people have the most convenient way to inform others by sending sms and to talk to them. Cells phones have created a network of human beings. However in the past, networks of people were limited, because it took lots of time and effort to spread news.
These improvement of communications have resulted good, but in a decrease of the quality of communication also. Communication is so easy nowadays, people take less time to think about what they're saying. An accurately conveyed message is less valuable, because people take communication for granted. People think that if a mistake is made, it can quickly be fixed with another phone call. However, when people in past write letters, they first think about what they have to say. Whatever was written that was done, nothing can be fixed so quickly or easily. It will never be same as it was.
The invention of the cellphone has changed the society by giving us the amazing power of communication. However, the cell phone is a great invention that has changed the convenience, speed, and efficiency of our modern day communication.
The cell phone has made communication more convenient than ever before, however earlier people used to write letters and post them to their relatives and friends. On the other hand, now people have a great invention of cell phone with them so that they can make a phone call anytime, anywhere..
In addition, when people send letters earlier it took so much of time to inform other person about anything, but now people have the most convenient way to inform others by sending sms and to talk to them. Cells phones have created a network of human beings. However in the past, networks of people were limited, because it took lots of time and effort to spread news.
These improvement of communications have resulted good, but in a decrease of the quality of communication also. Communication is so easy nowadays, people take less time to think about what they're saying. An accurately conveyed message is less valuable, because people take communication for granted. People think that if a mistake is made, it can quickly be fixed with another phone call. However, when people in past write letters, they first think about what they have to say. Whatever was written that was done, nothing can be fixed so quickly or easily. It will never be same as it was.
The invention of the cellphone has changed the society by giving us the amazing power of communication. However, the cell phone is a great invention that has changed the convenience, speed, and efficiency of our modern day communication.
Good, but sometimes it sounds too informal to be an academic essay. We'll talk about setting the right tone in a writing tomorrow. Also there a number of simple grammmar mistakes especially with tense and sing/plur....
ReplyDeleteBut well organised, and with some well thought ideas.